Analysis of To squirm



Here in the seas of our absense
Oh how to appreciate
The bridge of my dreams
Not the same as it was!

Why´d you let me rattle off fatal
I would never let you
I would never hurt you
Leave me for dead like some slim convict.
For under your glare i´m thin
Yes thin coconut trunk to the fronds babe
Don´t exterminate me from from your mind
Enough balls to say I admire!

You´d see my corpse and not recognise
You´d be that girl about 11.00am sun rotting me like you did


Scheme AXAA XBBXXXXX AX
Poetic Form
Metre 10011101 111010 01111 101111 1111110110 111011 111011 111111110 11011111 111011011 1101011111 01111101 11111011 111110111101111
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 480
Words 99
Sentences 5
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 4, 8, 2
Lines Amount 14
Letters per line (avg) 28
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 129
Words per stanza (avg) 31
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Submitted on April 16, 2015

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Simon Elliott

Throughapoetseye.blogspot.comSimon Bernard Elliott.International poetry.It´s about creativity and real expression.I am a traveller, I´ve lived all over the world. Always in close proximity to nature and poetry. I´ve written since I was sixteen now I am 31. I aim to open people´s eyes with my poetry. I aim to entertain and also to provoke reactions. If I can do any of these things- I think the hours spent writing will all be worth it. more…

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