Analysis of Tia's Love Letter



While we remain on this Earth
I promise I shant waste your time, or what you're worth
I wish you could look me deep in my dark brown eyes
And grasp my hands, I tell no lies
I need a companion to seek comfort for at night
Someone that'll help me with my depression's fight
I've never been the one to take for granted, for amuse
I've never been the one to uphold on abuse
I've never been one to misuse
True, I will never fill in those shoes
I want to be the man that you can trust
The man you'll capture love for not just lust
This may not be facebook, but you are my Candy Crush
I can't help but to fill your head with my emotion, enough to blush
Enough will never be enough, my emotions for you last forever
They constantly churn out ideas and words to mold together
-Intermission-
"I understand you've been hurt. So have I Miss Tia. Things in life get tough but they get much better, I guarentee ya. Something about you turned me on from first glimpse. I can't explain this phenomenom, but everything else vanished in exclipse, as I pictured our lips locked in a kiss. I pictured us happily being quite the pair. Maybe couple, maybe friends. Our Companionship will increase over time as we learn more about each other. So far I am beyond a friendly salutation when I'd personally display my intense affection by holstering your warm cheeks i my hands, my tongue tracing the outline of your lips. I wouldn't kiss you just yet, I'd tell you this."

"You are among the finest women I've ever had the pleasure of meeting.
You are divine in nature and have given my dormant volcanic heart quite the heating. I will help cool your rage, I am Professor Frost after all. I will take your touch with gratefulness, I will appreciate it every single time. Might even crave it all the time, I could get too attached and be clingy.."

"After telling you that I'd gently caress your lips with mine and swiftly moved my hands from your cheek to your firm bottom. Squeezing it with such tender force and delight. My body pressed against yours making the space between us quite tight."
-End of Intermission-

Today you are my present, and I must capture your essence
Hi Tia ! And thank you for gracing me with your warmth and kindness.
Thank God for he has blessed me with your presence.

By: ©William J Dorsey Jr. (Copyright) October 2013


Scheme AABBCCDXDDEEFFGGHX XX CH IXI G
Poetic Form
Metre 1101111 110111111111 111111101111 01111111 1100101110111 110111111 11010111110101 110101101101 11011101 111101011 1111011111 0111011111 111111111101 11111111110100111 011101011010111010 1100110100111010 010 101111111110101111111101111001111111111011111011001111010110011101100101011010101100101011011111011101111010101111000011010101111111111100111111011111111 1101010101101010110 1101010011011001011010111111110101101111111111010110010111011101111101011 10101111001111101011111111110101111010011101011100101111 11010 011111001110110 1100111101111010 11111111110 110110110010
Characters 2,295
Words 433
Sentences 23
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 18, 2, 2, 3, 1
Lines Amount 26
Letters per line (avg) 70
Words per line (avg) 17
Letters per stanza (avg) 364
Words per stanza (avg) 86
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Submitted by matiasp.29602 on April 13, 2014

Modified on April 26, 2023

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