Analysis of The World of our Choice-A Poem



When I look and this dark sky I really wonder,
 As the birds fly hurriedly, returning to their nest!
 The emerging  tiny stars smiles at each other,
 Seeing the sudden quietness of earth in astonishment!

Man becomes tired not because of the so called work!
 The lack of calmness in mind triggers all problems!
 Man was taught love, as a better way to live!
 Often greediness and hatred kills the seed of peace!

Pure air and hygiene food makes this world a heaven!
 If we really want to live,  let us protect the nature!
 Environment safety is every one's problem!
 More precious they are, let's remember always!

We differ in thoughts, the color of our blood is same!
 We love, fear and laugh as our emotions also same!
 We have 'unity in diversity' haven't we my friend?
 We all one, the humans, the children of God!

As man is in highest order, no point in mere existence!
 Let's work to make this world a place of our choice!
 May the new dawn of tomorrow  fulfill our promises,
 Start your work today to find this world a better place!

A Poem by Ayubkhan.U
Source:  http://bestreviewsnarticles.blogspot.in/2012/09/the-world-of-our-choice-poem.html


Scheme AXAX XXXX BAXX CCXX XXXX BX
Poetic Form
Metre 111011111010 1011100010111 001010111110 100101001100100 1011010110111 011100110110 11111010111 10101010111 11011111010 11101111101010 0100101100110 1101110101 11001010110111 11101110010101 111000010010111 11101001011 111010101101010 111111011101 10111010110100 1110111110101 01011 1110111011
Closest metre Iambic heptameter
Characters 1,145
Words 199
Sentences 22
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 2
Lines Amount 22
Letters per line (avg) 40
Words per line (avg) 9
Letters per stanza (avg) 148
Words per stanza (avg) 33
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Submitted by ayub_k on May 30, 2013

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Ayubkhan U

Hi this is Ayubkhan.U from Chennai-India. I am a Poet and Advertising Copywriter based at Chennai. I have written more than one hundred poems and posted the same in my various blogs. I am also a Softskill trainer specialized in Communication skill. I have written many Reviews, Short Stories and Children Stories and published in my various blogs. more…

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