Analysis of The Wonderful Land

Mahipat Singh 1973 (Uttarakhand)



Oh! God, show me that wonderful land,
Where you live and creating things,
Where is beauty and joy,
People are equal, calm and no racial, no religious!

Where has no stress lives with full joy,
Smiling faces, living with peace of mind,
Cool and comfortable weather,
Where is no politics, no politicians,
No hungry, no orphan lives,
No poors, no beggars,
No money, not riches!

Oh! Almighty God show me that planet,
If, you have such haven?
You love with your creations,
If, you want to see happy with smiling faces!

Show me that wonderful land ?
Where it's in this universe,
I want to shift and live there,
Everyday Lunch and Dinner with you,
In that the wonderful land!

By: Mahipat Singh
    28th May, 2015, time 10:10 PM


Scheme AXBX BXXCXXD XXCD AXXXA XX
Poetic Form
Metre 111111001 11100101 111001 10110101101010 11111111 1010101111 10100010 111101010 1101101 11110 110110 1010111110 111110 1111010 111111011010 1111001 110110 1111011 101101011 0101001 111 111111
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 698
Words 129
Sentences 9
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 4, 7, 4, 5, 2
Lines Amount 22
Letters per line (avg) 25
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 110
Words per stanza (avg) 26
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Modified on March 05, 2023

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Mahipat Singh

Leo Mahipat Singh Jetha was born in 10th August, 1973 in Kandai, Janapad Chamoli, Uttarakhand, India and he completed his schooling and Intermediate from there. Presently he is living in Faridabad. He is dual PG from Pondicherry University in Master of Foreign Trade (MFT), MBA (International Business), graduated from M.D. University in Arts (BA). He loves to Literature and wrote many Short Stories and Poems in English and Hindi languages. more…

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