Analysis of the treasure of a good hunter



now, two years after, my fingers ten of them
turn back to writing. oh, how you wanted me to

what do you think i was doing for two years
there are moments, when my soul parted to my body
in some moments, i flee in dreams
trying to balance heaven of fixed stars. sometimes, too
i was willing to undergo the fleshiness
shape the volition of other arms. well...
i was just trying to shape yet. i was just thinking
and maybe, too
you started to file fresh lavender secrets

i heard a vessel cracks
contours, white flames, filled with dramatic feathers

jeweled in my silence, you saw nothing
but theatrical laughter. bowing not knowing what... and

in the deep of a powerful mask
i have to stroke alone the treasure of a good hunter.

©anna laurencio; claimed/10.06/2013


Scheme XA BXXABXCAX XX CX XX X
Poetic Form
Metre 11110110111 111101111011 11111110111 1110111101110 01101101 1011010111011 111010101 1001011011 1111011111110 0101 11011110010 110101 1111101010 101101110 10100101011010 001101001 11110101010110 1011
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 745
Words 139
Sentences 10
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 2, 9, 2, 2, 2, 1
Lines Amount 18
Letters per line (avg) 33
Words per line (avg) 8
Letters per stanza (avg) 100
Words per stanza (avg) 23
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Submitted on October 09, 2013

Modified on March 05, 2023

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