Analysis of the treasure of a good hunter
now, two years after, my fingers ten of them
turn back to writing. oh, how you wanted me to
what do you think i was doing for two years
there are moments, when my soul parted to my body
in some moments, i flee in dreams
trying to balance heaven of fixed stars. sometimes, too
i was willing to undergo the fleshiness
shape the volition of other arms. well...
i was just trying to shape yet. i was just thinking
and maybe, too
you started to file fresh lavender secrets
i heard a vessel cracks
contours, white flames, filled with dramatic feathers
jeweled in my silence, you saw nothing
but theatrical laughter. bowing not knowing what... and
in the deep of a powerful mask
i have to stroke alone the treasure of a good hunter.
©anna laurencio; claimed/10.06/2013
Scheme | XA BXXABXCAX XX CX XX X |
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Poetic Form | |
Metre | 11110110111 111101111011 11111110111 1110111101110 01101101 1011010111011 111010101 1001011011 1111011111110 0101 11011110010 110101 1111101010 101101110 10100101011010 001101001 11110101010110 1011 |
Closest metre | Iambic pentameter |
Characters | 745 |
Words | 139 |
Sentences | 10 |
Stanzas | 6 |
Stanza Lengths | 2, 9, 2, 2, 2, 1 |
Lines Amount | 18 |
Letters per line (avg) | 33 |
Words per line (avg) | 8 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 100 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 23 |
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Submitted on October 09, 2013
Modified on March 05, 2023
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