Analysis of The Silliest Poem I’ve ever Written



I’m just an itching person,
Wherever I go,
Fleas are following me.
Oh Lord, won’t you let me be free!

The other day,
I was driving down the highway,
Can’t drive, but I was driving all the same,
When I saw this flea,
He was hitch-hiking.
Oh Lord, won’t you let me be free!

So I stopped and said,
You can jump right in,
There’s room for more,
And that’s what he did, saying,
Oh Lord, you’ve set me free!

I’m just an itching person,
Wherever I go,
Fleas are following me.
Oh Lord, won’t you let me be free!

Inge Meldgaard
2010
Based on a song written when I was 10 years old – a very long time ago


Scheme ABCC ddxceC xxxec ABCC dxb
Poetic Form
Metre 1111010 01011 111001 11111111 0101 1110101 1111110101 11111 11110 11111111 11101 11110 1111 0111110 111111 1111010 01011 111001 11111111 11 1 110110111110101101
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 593
Words 120
Sentences 8
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 4, 6, 5, 4, 3
Lines Amount 22
Letters per line (avg) 20
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 88
Words per stanza (avg) 24
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Inge Meldgaard

Born in Denmark in 1953, I migrated to Australia with my family in 1957. After spending my school years in Yallourn, I moved to Melbourne in 1970 to attend Monash University. Having graduated with a science degree in 1975, I worked in various fields, such as youth work, teaching, politics (with a special interest in the natural environment), social research, community development, and finally, information technology. I have also completed two graduate diplomas: one in sociology and the other in information technology, both at Swinburne University. Now retired, my last position was as an IT Manager at Monash University. Gardening, art, poetry and writing have also been life-long interests.I have recently published my first book, 'The Cicada', which is a crime/mystery novel, set in Australia, four hundred years into the future.Website: ingemeldgaard.daportfolio.com more…

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