Analysis of the sh*t box



long ago when i was so stupid i never thought id run into you again

a just for cause my defence forinsainity
this hole that still bleeds the one you put in me

burried soon under a pile of swollen memorys

i lost my soul some where around six foot deep

my concious mind will always be haunting me

covered in filth the only thoughts ill keep

she is the lie you know the one i wont admit

my favorite drug the one i wish i could quite

leaving is painless or so it seems
for those who are weak and hide behind false dreams

always thinking there was a better way loseing my mind i sh*t myself again today
to lose control as we grow old and to not know where we go long ago when we thought we knew in the bitter days i spent with you


Scheme X AB C D B D A A CC AX
Poetic Form
Metre 10111111011011101101 01111011 11111011101 1110011101 11111101111 111111101 1001010111 110111011101 110010111111 101101111 11111010111 11011010111111110101 11011111011111110111111001011111
Closest metre Iambic heptameter
Characters 713
Words 149
Sentences 1
Stanzas 10
Stanza Lengths 1, 2, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 2, 2
Lines Amount 13
Letters per line (avg) 44
Words per line (avg) 11
Letters per stanza (avg) 58
Words per stanza (avg) 15
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Submitted on April 25, 2015

Modified on April 11, 2023

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