Analysis of The Ones Before
On the stage of my youthful years,
trying to step the way they steer.
You know they, as the ones before.
Always striving to please them so much more.
Trying my best I thought I'd achieve,
but not in there eyes as they perceive.
For anger so fierce, so strong and bold.
Is what I get, so, me they scold.
These scars I bare, so deep, so sore,
who is to blame? But the ones before.
So now I move on and up in years,
and when I look back I shed more tears.
For thoughts of pain and so much more
are still in my mind, from the ones before.
It's a daily struggle to stay alive.
Battling urges of the past to survive.
Fighting the odds to become like them,
abusing us children again and again.
So for now I am the one before,
and I Love my children so much more.
Scheme | ABCCDDEECCAFCCGGHICC |
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Poetic Form | Tetractys (20%) Etheree (20%) |
Metre | 10111101 10110111 11110101 110111111 101111101 110111101 110111101 11111111 11111111 111110101 111110101 011111111 11110111 1101110101 1010101101 10010101101 100110111 01011001001 111110101 011110111 |
Closest metre | Iambic pentameter |
Characters | 736 |
Words | 154 |
Sentences | 14 |
Stanzas | 1 |
Stanza Lengths | 20 |
Lines Amount | 20 |
Letters per line (avg) | 29 |
Words per line (avg) | 8 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 573 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 154 |
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Submitted on May 01, 2011
Modified on March 05, 2023
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