Analysis of The Memory of Zanib
We sit together in
the humid room of
her empty apartment,
waiting for the buzz
of the fan to subside,
washing away the heat.
We pull out a well-worn
board and place it betwixt
us, tumbling ludo pieces
thunk against the cardboard
as the force of the past compels us…
In exotic Gujarat, more than
55 years ago, she last felt
his commanding presence,
as he held court, familiar
smooth marble beneath her
hand, and the smell of cumin
and coriander riding the kitchen's
heat currents, to consume the night-
Broken English shatters against
my ear, the clash of metal
on metal. Bony fingers advance
a red piece, ice cold blade meets
balmy throat, a bath of blood. Fleshy fingers
trace the peeling path of the dice,
fleeing figures slide on iron red garden trails.
Before us is his final battle cry
and the warm ooze of blood
conversing with sword,
as the invaders slaughter
the leader of these lands,
and she clutches his grand-child,
tasting salt.
The buzzing of the fan
softens to a hum
and the dusty blades blur time.
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Poetic Form | |
Metre | 110100 01011 010010 10101 101101 100101 111011 101101 1100110 10101 101101011 00100111 101111 101010 1111010 110010 1001110 001010010 11010101 10101001 1101110 110101001 0111111 10101111010 10101101 101011101101 0111110101 001111 01011 1001010 010111 0110111 101 010101 10101 0010111 |
Closest metre | Iambic tetrameter |
Characters | 980 |
Words | 182 |
Sentences | 6 |
Stanzas | 6 |
Stanza Lengths | 11, 8, 7, 7, 2, 1 |
Lines Amount | 36 |
Letters per line (avg) | 22 |
Words per line (avg) | 5 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 134 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 30 |
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Submitted on August 18, 2014
Modified on March 05, 2023
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