Analysis of The Golden Shore



I clasp grains of ashen sand,
My eyes, gazing upon windswept lands.
I walk, scaling the golden shore.
My body--lifeless--descends through the floor.

I weep, amidst a moving meadow; to my sanity, I implore;
"Wake me, please, from this dream," as I shudder before a taunting door, "For I have lost the trail, as it seems.
For returning, I have no means"

I wait; And receiving no reply, my mind, taunting, begins to pry;
My cheek rests upon a chilling stone floor;
In the distance, a phantom child cries (sending haunting rhythms unto the skies),

A shadow comes from the darkness, speaking: "A forlorn land, with one lone door. You must choose your course, or your grave, you dig for."
The child, "Here-Lies," vanished before my well-worn eyes.

To my reason, I beseech;
"Should I return to the weeping beach?"
I glance once more at this deathly state, and choose to pierce the morbid gate.

I approach, knocking at the abandoned door;
It swings open; decaying from the core.
A beam of air brushes past my face,
From my lips--a sigh of bliss;
I stroll, with tender grace.

Specks of sand swim through my feet,
Warmth descends; A healing sheet.
I see a shape draw near; A beauty that I adore.
Heretofore, my wish was to live no more;
But now, I hold in my arms, my perfect paramour.
And now, I long for the roar of the golden shore.


Scheme XXAA AXX XAB AB CCX AADXD EEAAAA
Poetic Form
Metre 1111101 11100111 11100101 1101001101 1101010111100101 1111111110010101111101111 10101111 11001010111100111 1110101011 0010010111010101001 0111010100011111111111111111 011110011111 1110101 110110101 11111110101110101 10110100101 1110010101 011110111 1110111 111101 1111111 1010101 1101110101101 011111111 11110111011 011110110101
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 1,300
Words 244
Sentences 15
Stanzas 7
Stanza Lengths 4, 3, 3, 2, 3, 5, 6
Lines Amount 26
Letters per line (avg) 39
Words per line (avg) 9
Letters per stanza (avg) 144
Words per stanza (avg) 34
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Submitted on April 11, 2011

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Clay

I like to write poems when I'm bored, I'm a teen. I play the piano, the drums, and the violin. i never get anyone commenting on any of my poems, so if you happened to see this, you should take the time to write an honest comment on one of my poems..thanks!! email me: claydubberly@yahoo.com. more…

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