Analysis of the fool and the quitter .



it is the fool inside you
who likes to smoke
they know the health risk
they think its a joke

so when you are lying
in a hospital bed
riddled with cancer
fgull of regret

remember the wisest words
a man ever said
it is the quitter who is living
it is the fool that is dead


Scheme XAXA BCXX XCBC
Poetic Form Quatrain  (67%)
Metre 1101011 1111 11011 11101 111110 00101 10110 1101 0100101 01101 110101110 1101111
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 259
Words 57
Sentences 1
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 12
Letters per line (avg) 18
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 71
Words per stanza (avg) 19
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Submitted on August 04, 2017

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Alan Green 'Guppyman'

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