Analysis of The Death of Akaniki



She is in the Dream World now
where happiness is a warm skin
never to be shed
But let it be known that I grieve
the soft sounds of her bells
from the scaffold dangling
ring my eyes with great sorrow
The Sand Hills are no longer quiet
with her memories
For her I would cut my hair
with jagged strokes
each strand falling, an ache for her loss
For her I will cry
each tear stain holds a story of her
For her I would scrape my skin
my pain that I shall never see her again
This slice of Native America gone cold


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Poetic Form
Metre 1100111 11001011 10111 11111111 011101 1010100 1111110 011111010 10100 1011111 111 111011101 10111 111101010 1011111 11111101001 11110010011
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 492
Words 105
Sentences 1
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 17
Lines Amount 17
Letters per line (avg) 24
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 403
Words per stanza (avg) 105
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Submitted on May 01, 2011

Modified on March 05, 2023

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