Analysis of The Dead Soldier



We were born together to live together with one heart to fight for the good or to the bad and to make our heart unbreakable to stay together no matter what will happens
But sometimes life gets to be unfair with both of by breaking all of those thinks that i just mentioned above we have to fight for our leader and not for our rights or believes
Our power is Occupation different parts of world and our favourite game is shooting none stop to those innocents people

Even the blood transplantation fear between us and them wronged during the war
 years after when the war ended up we lost many of martyrs brothers of the same ground
I decided to move on in my life to the world of painting pictures and drawing for a world fully peacefully
And looking for you to share the pain of that bloody war that we had in the past years

I started drawing paints around the world with the red color simply
 To shows the pain each that we both witnessed
so I kept drawing a dead solider in my paints
with the blood surrounded him
so my work start going into people heart

My art pieces are getting famous and well
known of seeing the dead solider in the middle of each paint
But my heart is torn me whenever his in the middle of each paint that I do
If his not in a paint I feel a lack of sadness

Years took me deep in paints more then ever and ended up knowing
About you were shot dead just a few days before the war ended up
And figuring out that the dead solider in my paints was always you
Like I said in the beginner we are twins brother unbreakable heart


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Characters 1,538
Words 304
Sentences 1
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 3, 4, 5, 4, 4
Lines Amount 20
Letters per line (avg) 62
Words per line (avg) 15
Letters per stanza (avg) 248
Words per stanza (avg) 61
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Submitted on June 05, 2015

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Ahmad Al_khatat

I started writing poems since I was ten years old, Most of my poems are free verse or proses.Which talked about sad dark and wild romance .Even some ones talking politics.http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Prose_poetryhttp://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Free_verse ahmad4all_2@hotmail.comMontreal - Canada Thank you more…

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