Analysis of The day just started just so wrong



The day just started just so wrong Grandmother's roses murmur as they war out
Amidst the deceitfulness of the thirsty wind
I hate seeing them blood colored
It brings an excruciating happiness that lingers me
Perhaps not laid in my hands
A cup of coffee seems not enough
Nor a ginger tea
To bring the orchestra back into music
the melody I used to know swings in silence
If could barely reach my throat.


Scheme ABCDEFDGHI
Poetic Form Etheree  (30%)
Tetractys  (20%)
Metre 011101111010101111 010110101 11101110 11101001001101 0111011 011101101 10101 11010010110 010011111010 1110111
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 393
Words 74
Sentences 1
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 10
Lines Amount 10
Letters per line (avg) 33
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 327
Words per stanza (avg) 74
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Submitted on May 01, 2011

Modified on March 05, 2023

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