The day just started just so wrong



The day just started just so wrong Grandmother's roses murmur as they war out
Amidst the deceitfulness of the thirsty wind
I hate seeing them blood colored
It brings an excruciating happiness that lingers me
Perhaps not laid in my hands
A cup of coffee seems not enough
Nor a ginger tea
To bring the orchestra back into music
the melody I used to know swings in silence
If could barely reach my throat.
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Submitted on May 01, 2011

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Scheme ABCDEFDGHI
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 393
Words 74
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 10

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