Analysis of The creator of the universe visits earth one last time



And now spring has sprung too hot 
What amazing wonders I have seen
What beautiful justice have I not?
On this dot, blue and green
What wonders 
With these weary hands 
I have made to be

My sun, beautiful sun, rising gently
In the east
One of billions, but still brilliant
On this billboard I sit and look out
Over the city
Just waking up, out and about

And I eat my last bagel

All over lands I travel
For one last parting 
Goodbye
Things have taken shape
In extraordinary ways
I will need good scissors to 
Cut these ties and earthly tethers
For we have grown together

Now faith is restored in you,
Completed is my quest
No more I say, No more
My weary hands will finally rest


Scheme ABABCXD DXXEDE F FXXXXGCX GHXH
Poetic Form
Metre 0111111 101010111 110010111 111101 110 11101 11111 1110011010 001 11101110 11111011 10010 11011001 0111110 1101110 11110 1 11101 001001 1111101 11101010 1111010 1110101 010111 111111 110111001
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 659
Words 129
Sentences 2
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 7, 6, 1, 8, 4
Lines Amount 26
Letters per line (avg) 21
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 107
Words per stanza (avg) 26
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Submitted on April 10, 2011

Modified on March 05, 2023

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skitheeast

Hey, some of these aren't that great but what the heck. I just like writing how I feel in the moment so some of my poems might be confusing because I was confused in that moment. Maybe thats why I wanted to write a poem, to sort out my thoughts. Anyway, just read them and hopefully just one of them will bring you some kind of joy, or make you feel some kind of connection. Peace.>>>I also do star photography - probably why space works its way into a lot of my writing. http://mcb-photography.blogspot.com/ more…

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