Analysis of tell him my request



all i want for new years  is for him to love me the way  i love him.
my feelings are real and the only way i could express it is through tears.
weep through the nights in silence
with insecure mind
hoping he  wont  find another girl that'll be better than me.

my heart is filled with fears
the heart cant be messed with.
my heart is weak and is breakable
i mean i cry a river whenever my heart bleeds.
i loved him
if only i could have him

he lives in me
i think about him every second of the minute
i wonder if he does the same


Scheme AXXXB XXXXAA BXX
Poetic Form
Metre 11111111111101111 110110010111011111 1101010 11001 1011101011011011 111111 011111 111101100 1111010010111 111 1101111 1101 11011100101010 11011101
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 514
Words 110
Sentences 6
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 5, 6, 3
Lines Amount 14
Letters per line (avg) 29
Words per line (avg) 8
Letters per stanza (avg) 136
Words per stanza (avg) 38
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Submitted on September 30, 2013

Modified on March 05, 2023

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