Analysis of Sunday at Maggie's; Almost Dusk



She unfolded her spectacles
With such a slight movement
That the small click was devastating --
A decibal between settling dust and shuffling feet --
But more like maple seeds dashed against a wet windshield.

She was intimate with such small things,
The smells of geraniums.
The lush energy between earth and air.
Weak beams of light.

And it was the small way she focused her needle gray eyes,
Tapping excess tea from her thin spoon,
That charged the rented room,
Making me feel like embroidery thread
Bound too severely to course, mothballed fabric.

I knew her question.
She knew my answer.


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Poetic Form
Metre 10100100 110110 10111100 010110010101 111101101011 111001111 0110100 0110001101 1111 01101111001011 10111011 110101 1011101001 1101011110 11010 11110
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 576
Words 102
Sentences 7
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 5, 4, 5, 2
Lines Amount 16
Letters per line (avg) 30
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 119
Words per stanza (avg) 26
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Submitted on May 01, 2011

Modified on March 05, 2023

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