Analysis of Sudden Thoughts



Emptiness settles after
the anger subsides
The pain is numbing,
causing my spirit to die.
Misled by promises unkept-
The torment runs deeper
than the oceans depth.
I contemplate all of my mistakes
I lay wide awake
Wondering if I have been
raped
By life--
And what I thought
would be a gratifying existence
Turned out to be a pitiful resistance Against time
and the inevitable
We all must die!
Excitement turns into fear
masked by
What some see as strength?
At any moment
I will break
down into what
I have come to hate...
Me.


Scheme ABCDDAEFGHIJKLMNDODPQGRST
Poetic Form Tetractys  (44%)
Metre 1001010 01001 01110 1011011 0111001 01110 10101 11011101 11101 1001111 1 11 0111 110100010 11110100010011 0001000 1111 0101011 11 11111 11010 111 1011 11111 1
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 501
Words 96
Sentences 6
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 25
Lines Amount 25
Letters per line (avg) 17
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 418
Words per stanza (avg) 96
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Submitted on May 01, 2011

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Cherise Joy Thomas

Cherise Joy Thomas is a published author, song writer and poet. She recently published her first book of poetry, entitled Evolving Realm, now available on Lulu.com. She is currently working on her auto-biography due in the Summer of 2010. Cherise can be reached via email cherisejthomas76@yahoo.com more…

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