Analysis of success!!!



Success is a stone's throw away
One can easily walk through
And sai it a very good day
But success means what?
Is it binary or cipher
Or a
Success in school class
Having a good grade and pass
Success in business and trade
Is to set your brand beast made
And accumulate pile of dollar
Dance in the parties with white collar..

Success in sports and game
Is to earn name and fame
Fill your pocket tight
No any kind of blame…..

Success in politics
Is to playing tricks
Establish hegemony
Register your name
In history of ethics….

Success for a thief
Is little tedious and brief
Either he will enjoy the loot
Or in a cell he will play flute,

Success for a poet
Is painful sight
Lots  of sweat
Then after death
You become great,

Success in love
 Is to get your dove
Have some offspring
And wander for buying things

Success has different stories
Every success has its own glories,

But
Life is a school
For certain days
All victories apart
If you play wrong ways,

The purity of soul
And depart with dignity
Shedding brutality
He becomes the real celebrity,

Otherwise all of the gains
Will go to the drains……


Scheme AXABCXDDEECC FFGF HHIFH JJKK BGXXX LLXX MM BXNXN XIII OO
Poetic Form
Metre 01101101 1110011 01101011 10111 11100110 10 01011 1001101 0101001 1111111 00101110 100101110 010101 111101 11101 110111 01010 11101 0100100 10011 0100110 01101 11010001 10110101 10011111 011010 1101 111 1101 1011 0101 11111 111 0101101 01110010 1000111110 1 1101 1101 110001 11111 010011 0011100 100100 101010100 101101 11101
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 1,061
Words 205
Sentences 5
Stanzas 10
Stanza Lengths 12, 4, 5, 4, 5, 4, 2, 5, 4, 2
Lines Amount 47
Letters per line (avg) 19
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 88
Words per stanza (avg) 21
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Submitted on August 26, 2013

Modified on March 05, 2023

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