Analysis of Struggle!
You need wealth
Take it
Give me health.
You are striving for adventure
I am struggling with a bone fracture,
You are preparing for a horse race
I am washing tears on my face
You aspire for winning the race
I dream for walking a distance,
You are working hard for perfection
I am preparing to bear the next injection,
You are building muscles with energy drink
With continuous drip my muscles getting shrink,
You are briskly exercising under the shed
I am carefully learning to move on the bed,
You are hoping for a sure medal
I am hoping to learn walking with the pedal,
You aspire to have a clean sweep
I aspire to leave the bed one day n start creep,
Your medals will be cheered by a crowd
My all survival aids will be thrown under a shroud,
If you lose never mind have another chance
If I lose this struggle it will be the last stance,
Nevertheless,
We are players of the same game
With only difference that
You will get name and fame
I may just save my name
Or finally over is my game.
However
My pain will never go in vain
I am a life time victory, will pop up again……
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Poetic Form | |
Metre | 111 11 111 11101010 1110010110 110101011 11101111 10111001 11110010 111011010 110101101010 11101011001 101001110101 11101001001 111001011101 111010110 111011101010 10111011 101110111111 110111101 1101011111001 11110110101 111110111011 001 11101011 1101001 111101 111111 110010111 10 11110101 1101110011101 |
Closest metre | Iambic tetrameter |
Characters | 1,056 |
Words | 210 |
Sentences | 4 |
Stanzas | 10 |
Stanza Lengths | 3, 2, 4, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 11 |
Lines Amount | 32 |
Letters per line (avg) | 27 |
Words per line (avg) | 7 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 85 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 21 |
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Submitted on June 27, 2013
Modified on March 05, 2023
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