Analysis of Sorry, I Just Couldn't Make It



Fell in love
In Chicago. . .
Doing homework.
It felt like I fell off a building,
Or passed out after a day of fasting.
It hit me as hard as not finding a parking place at dinnertime.
Do you see the sleep lines of my face?
I obviously have still not recovered
Because I can't find my shoes,
All my clothes are dirty,
And I don't have anything to wear.
My heart has been taken hostage,
And I can't stop dialing for help.
I feel I've been abducted by aliens.
I wake up and can't walk.
I've got 24-hour amnesia
All the time.
I know I'm in Chicago but,
Am I still in love?


Scheme ABCDDEFGHIJKLMNOEPA
Poetic Form
Metre 101 001 101 111111010 1111001110 1111111100101110 111011111 11000111010 0111111 111110 01111011 11111010 011110011 11110101100 111011 1110010 101 1110011 11101
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 549
Words 113
Sentences 13
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 19
Lines Amount 19
Letters per line (avg) 22
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 427
Words per stanza (avg) 115
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Submitted on May 01, 2011

Modified on March 05, 2023

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