Analysis of Something in me



Sleeping at night and walking in the

darling light.Laying in my arm but she

didn't feel so warm.Smiling at me as I

smiled back.She was cold as a freezer as I

froze like a freezer.She laid and died in

my arms.The person of a child who was

filled with warmth.A tear fell out my eye

as I begin to cry.Oh Please Oh Please dont

let it end this way.A cry for help I begin

to say.But something was holding me back

from calling for help.And I knew it was the

end as she lay there cold in my arms with

no heart beat.But it was something else

that kept me going.Something I can stil

remember that she did as dhe rest in my

arms.It was her smile that she gave that

sent me hope and warmth.That let you know

that it was only the beginning for

something that was and died inside of me.


Scheme A B C C D X C E D X A X X X C E X X B
Poetic Form
Metre 101101000 10101111 101111111 1111101011 11011010 111010111 11111111 1101111111 11111111101 111011011 1101111110 1111110111 11111101 1111111 01011111101 11011111 11101111 1111000101 1011010111
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 754
Words 168
Sentences 15
Stanzas 19
Stanza Lengths 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1
Lines Amount 19
Letters per line (avg) 32
Words per line (avg) 8
Letters per stanza (avg) 32
Words per stanza (avg) 8
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Submitted on September 06, 2010

Modified on March 05, 2023

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