Analysis of Something in me
Sleeping at night and walking in the
darling light.Laying in my arm but she
didn't feel so warm.Smiling at me as I
smiled back.She was cold as a freezer as I
froze like a freezer.She laid and died in
my arms.The person of a child who was
filled with warmth.A tear fell out my eye
as I begin to cry.Oh Please Oh Please dont
let it end this way.A cry for help I begin
to say.But something was holding me back
from calling for help.And I knew it was the
end as she lay there cold in my arms with
no heart beat.But it was something else
that kept me going.Something I can stil
remember that she did as dhe rest in my
arms.It was her smile that she gave that
sent me hope and warmth.That let you know
that it was only the beginning for
something that was and died inside of me.
Scheme | A B C C D X C E D X A X X X C E X X B |
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Poetic Form | |
Metre | 101101000 10101111 101111111 1111101011 11011010 111010111 11111111 1101111111 11111111101 111011011 1101111110 1111110111 11111101 1111111 01011111101 11011111 11101111 1111000101 1011010111 |
Closest metre | Iambic pentameter |
Characters | 754 |
Words | 168 |
Sentences | 15 |
Stanzas | 19 |
Stanza Lengths | 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1 |
Lines Amount | 19 |
Letters per line (avg) | 32 |
Words per line (avg) | 8 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 32 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 8 |
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Submitted on September 06, 2010
Modified on March 05, 2023
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