Analysis of Something from when I was asleep



It was a brief moment. There was no context, or speech.
We folded into each other like magnets.
Crook of arm meeting joint of wrist, neck pressed against neck so I felt the faint throb of her pulse.
The points of contact sent tingling multicoloured ripples outward over us.
Our eyes were closed, we were crouched behind a Roman pillar. It was night.
And her scent of old books and fresh coffee lingered.

the midnight blue of our stolen night sought refuge from the sun in the lost corners of her eyes
the dust in her hair left my fingertips white
we were pointless and beautiful
and we cried stars


Scheme XXXXAX XAXX
Poetic Form
Metre 1101101111011 11001110110 1111011111011111011101 0111110011010101 101011010101010111 001111011010 01111010111010100110101 0100111101 10100100 0111
Closest metre Iambic heptameter
Characters 598
Words 111
Sentences 9
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 6, 4
Lines Amount 10
Letters per line (avg) 48
Words per line (avg) 11
Letters per stanza (avg) 239
Words per stanza (avg) 55
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Submitted on December 19, 2016

Modified on March 05, 2023

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