Analysis of Solar Furnace

Neil McLeod 1947 (Oxford)



Solar Furnace
(Left to their own devices young boys can be cruel rascals; strings attached to cats tails is an example.  The solar furnace kept us amused for hours.)

Those thick domed headlight lenses
Make excellent solar condensers
For an optical crucible.

The trick is to make the depth
Of the earth hole equal to the focal length
Of the lens.

The sides are smoothed with water
And the edge close fitting
So nothing can escape.

On the equator the sun is overhead every day,
And peering down we could see the prey
Magnified in the pit.

The center floor became very hot
And woodlice or siafu ants delighted us
When their toes hit the fire .

Ultimately everything went pop
And you could feel this through the earth
As the chamber filled with smoke.

Spiders could hang themselves
Out of danger for a long time
But tumbling they sizzled.


Scheme AX XAX XXX BXX CCX XAB XXX XXX
Poetic Form
Metre 1010 11110101111101010111111010010101101110 111110 1100101 11100100 0111101 10111010101 101 0111110 001110 110101 100100111011001 010111101 10001 010101101 011110101 1111010 10001011 01111101 1010111 101101 11101011 1100110
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 812
Words 150
Sentences 9
Stanzas 8
Stanza Lengths 2, 3, 3, 3, 3, 3, 3, 3
Lines Amount 23
Letters per line (avg) 29
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 84
Words per stanza (avg) 19
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Submitted by NeilMcLeod on April 14, 2015

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Neil McLeod

Born in Oxford, raised in Kenya, past winner of Los Slamgeles Poetry Slam and author of abitingchance.blogspot.comand "The First Thanksgiving".Doctor McLeod is a performing poet who has recited at Highland Games, dinners and Burns Nights for the last 36 years. He is happily married, lives and works in Los Angeles,has three children, and practices as a dentist on Sunset Boulevard:http://www.drneilmcleod.com/He can be contacted by e-mail at drneilmcleod@yahoo.com and will willingly entertain requests to share his work with permission. more…

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