Analysis of Smoke Rings



Smoke rings around my finger,
Deep in pensive thought am I.
Coffee stains upon paper sheets,
Where my feeling scribed now lie.

Pearls of words strung together,
Recount images of distant meorable past.
Bleed together in hazen vision,
By mood and moment now cast.

A feeling of gutted emptiness,
Evoked by each I scrawl.
What is purged and paged,
Is but smoke rings after all.


Scheme ABXB ACXC XDXD
Poetic Form Quatrain 
Metre 1101110 1010111 10101101 1110111 1111010 0110011011 101001010 1101011 010110100 011111 11101 1111101
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 362
Words 65
Sentences 6
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 12
Letters per line (avg) 25
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 99
Words per stanza (avg) 22
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Submitted on January 29, 2016

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Mike Williams

I am a painter, poet, and writer from Texas. I have a large volume of poetry, which I hope to publish in an anthology. I am best known for my poem 'Extrairdinary Mind'. I am also working on several novels and short stories at the moment. I write a wide variety of genres. I also draw, paint fresco, oils, and mixed media. My most famous piece is 'Psychedelic Cows', which placed 1st at the Houston Livestock Show and Rodeo. It became the inspiration for the sculptures that followed. You can follow my platform on Pinterest. more…

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