Analysis of Sister Goddess
Sister goddess where've you vanished to
in this; my tragic inspiration's need?
I beg of you, freshen my life anew
for my sweet imagination's stymied.
Can't you see me here in desperate sighs
while soft shivered lace consumes the spirit?
Return and slip that long hard gaze in eyes
which flutter inside despair's soft poet.
Exotic chocolate: it does not console,
orange pastel shapes do not reveal words,
I really need once more my feelings whole,
but alas I fear that you fly with birds.
Satin looks which used to soothe this laughter
no longer bring me cool rainbow's rapture.
Sister goddess where're your golden wings
that delicately blew warm temptation?
My sorrow roams along the cold ceilings
which span old times here above my dungeon.
Rescue me! I implore your sanity
swings back into this soul who weeps petals,
this fragrant fear feeds on me; it's hungry
for more and I can not bear its bristles.
Oh vision of wonderful theory's grace,
capture me again with fantastic smiles?
I long to rest my dreams upon your face
so I may find in those features my styles.
Stuttered confusion bellows frustration
while I try my dark senses to sharpen.
Sister goddess where're the songs you sung
to me as I draped stars across the night?
This battered emotion is bleeding; stung
by your absence which covers me with fright.
My lover, friend, companion and quaint pain,
caress me with kisses blown from your lips?
Poetry; prose I simply can't abstain
while you quietly wander ancient ships.
Language is my very essence, my all,
saturate me with your presence dear muse
as beauty drops fruit from the garden's wall,
for these colourful shades turn into blues.
Hear my recital which begs with hot shame,
I am yours my dear, please come and reclaim?
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Poetic Form | |
Metre | 1010111101 0111011 1111101101 111110 111110101 1110101010 0101111101 110011110 0101011110 1001111011 1101111101 1011111111 1011111110 110111110 1010111101 1100011010 1101010110 1111101110 1011011100 1101111110 1101111110 1101111110 1101100101 1010110101 1111110111 1111011011 101010010 1111110110 1010110111 1111110101 1100101101 1110110111 1101010011 0111101111 1001110101 1110010101 1011101011 101111011 1101110101 11111011 1101011111 1111111001 |
Closest metre | Iambic pentameter |
Characters | 1,698 |
Words | 302 |
Sentences | 20 |
Stanzas | 3 |
Stanza Lengths | 14, 14, 14 |
Lines Amount | 42 |
Letters per line (avg) | 33 |
Words per line (avg) | 7 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 463 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 101 |
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Submitted on September 10, 2010
Modified on March 05, 2023
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