Analysis of Sickness of Darkness




Unknown the depth of dark
That lies behind the hill
Shadow cast as sun sets
Beyond the light's arc
The valley remains still
Willfully one forgets

Observing from the top
Looking only ahead
Blind to what lay below
A pit for those who drop
With their sickness embed
Far from the bright plateau

Upon the other side
Turning back to the past
Now level are their souls
Light the only divide
Much clearer the contrast
Darkness and its controls

Unknown the depth of dark
Move away from the hill
Shadows grow as sun sets
Past the reach of light's arc
Those in need remain still
Willfully one forgets


Scheme AbcabC defdef ghighi AbcabC
Poetic Form
Metre 010111 110101 11111 01011 010011 100101 010101 101001 111101 011111 111001 110101 010101 101101 110111 101001 110010 100101 010111 101101 11111 101111 101011 100101
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 566
Words 108
Sentences 1
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 6, 6, 6, 6
Lines Amount 24
Letters per line (avg) 20
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 120
Words per stanza (avg) 27
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Submitted on March 01, 2017

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Jillian Veitenheimer

My writing is a way for things to flow out of me that I didn't even know was within me. By sharing it with all the other poets out there I can rebuild my strength in myself. I can free my soul and let it soar in the stars. Let the wind rip me free of the being that carries my emotions. Poetry is my heart beat. more…

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