Analysis of She Is A Ghost Town...



Poetry's fashioned on the crack of a harsh look.

Love's handed over with a delicate word,
eyes speak parlous anger.

Precious silence is broken-battered
as I twist origami shapes that smile;
paper thoughts on table-tops.

A thousand different personalities erupt,
the room's a whirlwind of pleasure
while pain seeks the rhythm of sorrow,
with a kiss I blow subtle minds wild.

"My choice is mine to make,
I can write a poem without words
if that is my desire, my wish."
She breaks the pen these eyes hold,
ink stains her rippled anger as sighs fade.

"I am a poet - my time is spent curled
up inside words; flutters of fine language.
Ego; emotional complexity,
I am simplicity with the folds
of a wondrous intellectual pause."
But she is not impressed with that.

"Sometimes I'm a whir of feathered motion
or the broken back that aches - Withered!
Always I am chasing the day; the night.
I devour artistic behaviour
on occasion and delve into colour,
but whatever my title says, I think."
Her shrugs are slaps across my spirit.

And this volatile road slowly winds,
I feel like the last man alive,
savouring every single moment
before the bubble that envelopes me
is burst by her laughter, her rage.
No flurry of birds grace
this quiet time, remembrance,
she is a ghost town in my head.


Scheme X AB AXX XBXX XXXXX XXCXXX XAXBBXX XXXCXXXX
Poetic Form
Metre 1101011011 11010101001 11110 101011010 1111111 1011101 010100010001 0101110 111010110 101111011 111111 111010011 111101011 1101111 1101010111 1101011111 1011101110 1001000100 110100101 101001001 11110111 0110111010 101011110 111100101 10100101 101001011 110110111 011101110 011001101 11101101 11001010 010101101 11101001 110111 1101010 11011011
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 1,245
Words 231
Sentences 16
Stanzas 8
Stanza Lengths 1, 2, 3, 4, 5, 6, 7, 8
Lines Amount 36
Letters per line (avg) 28
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 126
Words per stanza (avg) 29
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Submitted on August 18, 2010

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Ian Sawicki

Ian Sawicki has been writing poetry for over twenty years. He is a Manchester born poet, who has dedicated his life to exploration and composition of poetry. His work reflects the many great influential experiences of his life, the pain, the pleasure combined to create new exciting poetry. If anyone is interested in my books then please visit my lulu storefront. All artwork on these books is by my own hand. http://stores.lulu.com/chasingtheday more…

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