Analysis of Second Rate



The ring of a loser-
I tried my best
But my best
failed the test.

Second rate
is a source of shame.
Second rate
is a bad name.

What can I do, stuck with performances
that are second rate?
What can I do,
the taunts can be more that I can take.


Scheme xaaa BcBc xbxx
Poetic Form Quatrain  (33%)
Metre 011010 1111 111 101 101 10111 101 1011 1111110100 11101 1111 011111111
Closest metre Iambic dimeter
Characters 231
Words 52
Sentences 5
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 12
Letters per line (avg) 15
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 61
Words per stanza (avg) 17
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Submitted on August 26, 2014

Modified on March 05, 2023

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