Analysis of Robbing the Nest



I had survived how many summers? Five?
Six? 'til, self-taught, I learned at last
of terror that lurks in situations
which those I trust (myself included)
would swear offer only perfect safety...
My ball rolled under my Grandma's house
and I, well-guarded, scuttled after to retrieve it,
mindless of the tarry soil fleeced with fluffy,
small red feathers, newly molted by matrons:
hens that clucked contentment,
set upon their hidden egg troves.
Spying their nests, I thought to rob them
and so earn a Grandma's love for a city boy
unversed in country ways. Thinking, I acted,
reaching for a nest unoccupied,
half hid behind a house block.
I closed my soft, expectant hand
upon a wriggling creature coiled among the eggs,
drew back like lightning to watch
a brightly spotted snake slide off
into the farther, deeper darkness
amid a squall of squawks.
Emerging empty handed, terrified,
it wasn't Grandma's love I earned that day.
I have always since encountered similar brilliant colored
dangers whenever I have thought to grab,
for myself or others,unclaimed treasures
in strange places, in warmer or in cooler weathers.


Scheme ABCDEFGECHCIJDKLMNOPQRKSTUVV
Poetic Form
Metre 1101110101 11111111 110110010 11111010 1110100110 11110111 0111010101011 10101011110 1110101110 111010 10111011 101111111 01101110101 1010110110 10101010 1101011 11110101 01011010101 1111011 01010111 010101010 010111 010101010 110111111 11110101001010 1001011111 111110 0110010101010
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 1,092
Words 186
Sentences 10
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 28
Lines Amount 28
Letters per line (avg) 32
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 893
Words per stanza (avg) 185
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Submitted on May 01, 2011

Modified on March 05, 2023

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L. Larry Amadore

A word lover who enjoys beautiful poetry of all genres and responds with admiration to fresh and felicitous phrases. [Retired manufacturing/production control mgr./marketing manager/financial analyst. USAF veteran; lived in US, Mexico, Germany, Turkey.] more…

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