Analysis of Razor Cuts



My pain engulfs me drowning my soul
Only one way for relief so i'm told
I could jump from a cliff or dance in front of a train
These are ways to get rid of my pain
But as peaceful as death seems, its not my choice
So I bleed from cuts, a razor's my voice
Screaming my pain for all to hear, even the deaf will feel
Cutting my body for all to see, even the blind will sqeal
As the blood flows from the razor's cuts, pain now escapes me
So i'll keep cutting, careful not to die, and live by the razor, pain free
For life


Scheme ABCCDDEAFFG
Poetic Form
Metre 11111011 1011101111 1111011101101 111111111 11101111111 1111101011 10111111100111 101101111100111 10111010111011 111101011101101011 11
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 507
Words 109
Sentences 1
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 11
Lines Amount 11
Letters per line (avg) 36
Words per line (avg) 10
Letters per stanza (avg) 397
Words per stanza (avg) 109
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Submitted on March 22, 2013

Modified on March 05, 2023

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