Analysis of Practicing His Craft



An herbaceous arbor flanks
the harbor where he labors
fitting words to spaces -- blanks
he fills, erases. He savors
bits of meaning, sculpting sound
to logic's shape, annealing word
and image, polishing a verbal mound
congealing on his pad. A bird chirps.
Song distracts. A moment's lapse.
He compares the bird's with his own work,
considers form and content, sees the gaps,
tosses his dead page into the water's murk.


Scheme ABABCDCEFGFG
Poetic Form
Metre 1010101 0101110 1011101 11010110 1110101 1110101 0101000101 1111011 1010101 101011111 0101010101 10111010101
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 407
Words 71
Sentences 6
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 12
Lines Amount 12
Letters per line (avg) 27
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 329
Words per stanza (avg) 71
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Submitted on May 01, 2011

Modified on March 05, 2023

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L. Larry Amadore

A word lover who enjoys beautiful poetry of all genres and responds with admiration to fresh and felicitous phrases. [Retired manufacturing/production control mgr./marketing manager/financial analyst. USAF veteran; lived in US, Mexico, Germany, Turkey.] more…

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