Analysis of poiesis



Daktulos scuttling underneath
withering palms of engraved hands
Short of breath orators play at the abacus,
orchestrate language,
scribbles on pages of shadows
and undulate keys under silent
syllables, echoing hands in the
wringing of ink out of paper

Pianists flitting across the ascent
of the black upon white keys,
paperlike, painted with flats indistinct
in the place of its twin sharp
softening sounds on the charcoal
and ashes from symphony in flame
Flickering opus from daktulos
pitching down strips of a timbre

Audible silence on scrolls
of apocalypse, begin at the end,
working unraveled in flames of the papyri
smoking with black ash
Ancestral lips forming burning maxims
on the clouds of inhaled smoke,
crackling, snapping. Alone in the stacks
of enflamed pyrrhics, silence.


Scheme XAXXXXXB XXXXXXAB XXBXXXXX
Poetic Form
Metre 110001 10011011 111100110100 1010 1011011 01011010 100100100 10111110 0101001001 1010111 11011001 0011111 1001101 010110001 1001011 10111010 1001011 101001101 1001001101 10111 0101101010 1011011 101001001 11110
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 791
Words 126
Sentences 3
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 8, 8, 8
Lines Amount 24
Letters per line (avg) 27
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 216
Words per stanza (avg) 42
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Submitted on May 01, 2011

Modified on March 05, 2023

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