Analysis of Poetically correct



Our future
Built and made in China
Our President
Will grab your vagina

We have a new venue
We're testing little toys
While the priests continue
Molesting little boys

Let's open some doors
To achieve worldwide peace
Instead of these wars
Leaving many deceased

Homeless veterans
Sleep on the streets
Lives were sacrificed
How do you sleep

What did they reap
Was it freedom or peace
Too poor to eat
Our dumpsters have a feast

Blacks fought for civil rights
It's now about gay rights
Silent in the closet
During the Civil Rights fight

No problem with gay people
God said it's abomination
Obama made it legal
I guess, it's Obama's nation


Scheme XAXA BCBC DEDF XXXG GEXF HHXX IJIJ
Poetic Form Quatrain  (43%)
Metre 1010 101010 1010 111010 110110 110101 101010 010101 11011 101111 01111 101001 10100 1101 1010 1111 1111 111011 1111 1010101 111101 110111 100010 1001011 1101110 1110010 101110 111110
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 605
Words 112
Sentences 1
Stanzas 7
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 28
Letters per line (avg) 18
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 73
Words per stanza (avg) 16
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Submitted on August 24, 2017

Modified on March 05, 2023

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