Analysis of Please Return to Me



Of simple dreams
For you I wait
A sad torn heart
That's bound in fate.

When nights are cold
I wonder true
The sky looks red
And never blue.

A burning touch
In dreams I wait
Your fiery light
Always my bait.

And some of truth
There is no end
In silence wait
I'll not defend.

A taken piece
Of life untold
A perfect heart
That's not that bold.


Scheme XABA CDXD XAXA XEAE XCBC
Poetic Form Quatrain 
Metre 1101 1111 0111 1101 1111 1101 0111 0101 0101 0111 11001 111 0111 1111 0101 1101 0101 1101 0011 1111
Closest metre Iambic dimeter
Characters 320
Words 69
Sentences 5
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 20
Letters per line (avg) 13
Words per line (avg) 3
Letters per stanza (avg) 53
Words per stanza (avg) 14
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Submitted by PathofStars on December 19, 2012

Modified on March 05, 2023

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