Analysis of Please Don't take her home



Father please save her she means the world to me,
 Please don't take her just set her cancer free,
 Father please save her this is all I ask,
 Weve got a good love and I know that it will last,
 I know it's up to you Lord whether she goes or stays,
 But I really need her so please don't take her away,
 Lord I am truly sorry for everything I done,
 But Lord I love her she is that special one,
 Lord will you save her could you please spare her life,
 The thought of loseing her cuts me like a knife,
 If there's anything I could do to help you change your mind,
 I would do anything Lord just give me sign,
 Anything you ask Lord I will humbly comply,
 I am begging Lord please don't let her die,
 I believe in your mercy and your miracles too,
 If you just spare her lifeLord there's nothing I wouldn't do,
 She's all that I ask forshe's the one I need,
 Please don't take her please don't take her from me,
 But it's up to you Lord you and yours alone,
 And I'll understand if you want to call her home


Scheme AABCDEFFGGHIJJKKLAMN
Poetic Form
Metre 10110110111 1110110101 1011011111 110110111111 1111111101111 1110101111001 111101011011 11110111101 11110111101 0111011101 1110111111111 1111011111 10111111001 1110111101 1010110011001 1111011101101 1111110111 1110111011 11111110101 01011111101
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 987
Words 201
Sentences 1
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 20
Lines Amount 20
Letters per line (avg) 38
Words per line (avg) 10
Letters per stanza (avg) 755
Words per stanza (avg) 201
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Submitted on June 04, 2013

Modified on March 05, 2023

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David Stephens

I have been writing all my life,I try to write a poem or song everyday. I love to write and I try to write to give back some to the Lord and I am using my girlfriends email so I can write my work on poetry.com more…

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