Analysis of Please don't choose me.



I can't do this on my own again.
I don't want to be alone.
If I ever lose you again
then my heart would be torn.
So don't leave me alone again
for we can't live our live torn.
Because we haven't flown
We haven't torn
and we haven't been shown
to many wrongs to make things right.
So today we don't fight,
we don't want to take flight.
We don't fight about any shite.
So leave us alone,
for we are home,
Where our hearts are supposed to be.
This is the life I choose,
for I don't want you,
I don't need you.
I don't think you ever
even loved me.
So Please don't choose me,
because you only use me.
That Person ain't even me.
Don't you see I'am Me,
That Person you choose
we never even me.
But the Person,
You wanted me to be.

Sorry about typos


Scheme ABACACBCBDDDDBXEFGGXEEEEEFEXE F
Poetic Form Tetractys  (40%)
Etheree  (40%)
Metre 111111101 1111101 11101101 111111 11110101 11111011 011101 1101 011011 11011111 101111 111111 11101101 11101 1111 110110111 110111 11111 1111 111110 1011 11111 0111011 1101101 111111 11011 110101 1010 110111 10011
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 713
Words 152
Sentences 15
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 29, 1
Lines Amount 30
Letters per line (avg) 18
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 276
Words per stanza (avg) 76
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Submitted on February 15, 2013

Modified on April 06, 2023

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