Analysis of Perfect Assassination



Inside the confines of a bitter laugh
there are shapes that explode divinity,
lyrical wisps of promise are obscured
as I set alight all regrets that shine.

Perhaps you'd like an encore as mists
devour these eyes that stare into cold space,
or an autographed smile; barbed with love's screams,
they are just piercing sounds which strip me bare,
don't concern yourself with my appetite
for I am full of broken promises.

An ardent enthusiast am I now,
dark folds of perfect assassination
gather wings I shrugged away with ease,
and I weep for the death of wild romance
while paradise captures fine poetry.

A moment away from security,
songs of Valhalla scrape up my torture,
and I can only record the events
as opportunity's fashionable
crack whisk me away to the bottle's domain.


Scheme XAXX XXXXXX XXXXA AXXXX
Poetic Form Tetractys  (20%)
Etheree  (20%)
Metre 010110101 1111010100 1001110101 1110110111 01111111 01011110111 111011111 1111011111 101011110 1111110100 110010111 111010010 101110111 0111011101 110101100 0100110100 111011110 0111001001 111000 1110110101
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 758
Words 134
Sentences 5
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 4, 6, 5, 5
Lines Amount 20
Letters per line (avg) 31
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 157
Words per stanza (avg) 34
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Submitted on June 04, 2010

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Ian Sawicki

Ian Sawicki has been writing poetry for over twenty years. He is a Manchester born poet, who has dedicated his life to exploration and composition of poetry. His work reflects the many great influential experiences of his life, the pain, the pleasure combined to create new exciting poetry. If anyone is interested in my books then please visit my lulu storefront. All artwork on these books is by my own hand. http://stores.lulu.com/chasingtheday more…

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