Analysis of Peace



The thought which brings tear in our eyes,
For those millions of people,who showered their lives.
That great day hasn't occured yet at least.
When each and every person can live in peace.

This war is on from years,
Two World wars has already brought many tears.
Soldiers at border daily die,
Leaving their beloved to cry.

If i am not forced to tell lie,
We all are responsible for this cry.
Stop saying it's job of others.
Otherwise we all will die and nobody bothers.

Changing our way of thinking,
For saving our lifeship from sinking.
We can bring love and peace,
It will have to come crawling on it's knees.

Then at border no gun speaks,
Birds will start comming back on their trees.
The day for which we waited long,
Will be here if i am not wrong.


Scheme XXXA XXBB BBCC DDAE XEFF
Poetic Form Etheree  (30%)
Quatrain  (20%)
Metre 011110101 1110111011 111101111 110100101101 111111 11110101101 10110101 1010111 11111111 1110100111 11011110 1011110110 10101110 110101110 111101 1111110111 1110111 11111111 01111101 11111111
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 733
Words 142
Sentences 12
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 20
Letters per line (avg) 29
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 118
Words per stanza (avg) 28
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Submitted on November 23, 2010

Modified on March 05, 2023

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