Analysis of Patel Girls Turn And Giggle
Dukhi chee,dukhi chee,dukhi chee
Pain,pain,pain pure,pale
Go away,go away,go away
The more I tell you to go away,the more you come
around drowing me in Pain
Dukhi chee,dukhi chee,dukhi chee
Rain soaks tulips;rain shocks shame
Lightnings come around with spikes and hail
Patel girls turn around and giggle-
Gossamer of gossips fly around;fall of their
lips like lily
And their auburn hair fly around in the sun
of the southern sprouts;hearts get broken
souls dumbfound
Patel girls please show me around your
Orchard of paradoxial,palatial mounts
Dukhi chee,dukhi chee,dukhi chee do,do me
unfound;my eyes are so sleepy,but sleep
doesn`t count;the clouds of livelihood
stab me all around,arti2nelam;nelam2arti!
Scheme | AbcdeAfbbgahhijkalmi |
---|---|
Poetic Form | Etheree (30%) |
Metre | 1111 11 11101 01111111111 011101 1111 11111 101011101 011101010 1001101111 1110 01101101001 10101110 110 011111011 10111 1111101 111111 111110 111111 |
Closest metre | Iambic pentameter |
Characters | 688 |
Words | 129 |
Sentences | 1 |
Stanzas | 1 |
Stanza Lengths | 20 |
Lines Amount | 20 |
Letters per line (avg) | 29 |
Words per line (avg) | 5 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 577 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 107 |
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Submitted on June 12, 2010
Modified on March 05, 2023
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