Analysis of Patel Girls Turn And Giggle



Dukhi chee,dukhi chee,dukhi chee
Pain,pain,pain pure,pale
Go away,go away,go away
The more I tell you to go away,the more you come
around drowing me in Pain
Dukhi chee,dukhi chee,dukhi chee
Rain soaks tulips;rain shocks shame
Lightnings come around with spikes and hail
Patel girls turn around and giggle-
Gossamer of gossips fly around;fall of their
lips like lily
And their auburn hair fly around in the sun
of the southern sprouts;hearts get broken
souls dumbfound
Patel girls please show me around your
Orchard of paradoxial,palatial mounts
Dukhi chee,dukhi chee,dukhi chee do,do me
unfound;my eyes are so sleepy,but sleep
doesn`t count;the clouds of livelihood
stab me all around,arti2nelam;nelam2arti!


Scheme AbcdeAfbbgahhijkalmi
Poetic Form Etheree  (30%)
Metre 1111 11 11101 01111111111 011101 1111 11111 101011101 011101010 1001101111 1110 01101101001 10101110 110 011111011 10111 1111101 111111 111110 111111
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 688
Words 129
Sentences 1
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 20
Lines Amount 20
Letters per line (avg) 29
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 577
Words per stanza (avg) 107
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Submitted on June 12, 2010

Modified on March 05, 2023

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