Analysis of Out Of Order



Where is it? Is it
Neither between nor through?
A whole hour I laughed
With you in a minute.
Sea of madness take your cue.

Oh, wow! Where was I
When I really needed me?
I wonder why, I wonder.
Supposing I am...
Am I then supposed to be?

Where are your heads
All you who pass by?
When you are wanted most
And you're not there
What good am I?

Is there a person alive?
Who's never made a mistake?
Sweet dreams baby.
It must be out of order
To grow up, to hope, to quake.


Scheme XAXXA BCDXC XBXXB XECDE
Poetic Form Etheree  (35%)
Metre 11111 100111 011011 110010 1110111 11111 1110101 1101110 01011 1110111 1111 11111 111101 0111 1111 1101001 1101001 1110 1111110 1111111
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 448
Words 97
Sentences 15
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 5, 5, 5, 5
Lines Amount 20
Letters per line (avg) 17
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 87
Words per stanza (avg) 24
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Submitted on February 05, 2010

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Wallace Dean LaBenne

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