Analysis of Others Feel...



I know what its like to be hated by family,
they were there,
 during all of the times you didnt see.

A past full of anger & hate,
none of it did I create.

Ive found that theres evil in all of us,
thats why I write about Jesus.

He came into my prison & set my mind free,
now this is the result of His company.

To share an understanding that the world denies,
a love that comes down,
 from above the crystal clear blue skies.

The day I began blaming myself,
was the day I started finding a place,
 on my minds back shelf.

Ive found that the battle is hidden within our own mind,
making us think we're the only kind.

"No one knows what I go through",
are the words we speak in our day due.

Understanding comes from a broken heart,
especially when its given new start.

You are not alone in your walk,
to hell with other peoples negative talk.

Walk real,
let others feel...


Scheme AXA BB CC AA DXD EXE FF GG HH II JJ
Poetic Form
Metre 1111111101100 101 101101111 0111101 1111101 1111100111 11110110 11011101111 11100111100 11101010101 01111 101010111 01101101 1011101001 11111 111010110011011 101110101 1111111 1011101011 010110101 010111011 11101011 11110101001 11 1101
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 844
Words 171
Sentences 11
Stanzas 11
Stanza Lengths 3, 2, 2, 2, 3, 3, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2
Lines Amount 25
Letters per line (avg) 27
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 60
Words per stanza (avg) 16
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Submitted on April 16, 2015

Modified on March 05, 2023

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