Analysis of Orange Eye



Oh, Bane you look upward
Toward the fine, orange moon
Insane intensity and a
pleasant peace
As the weather vane
Shifts the cool breeze
brings the story untold
We never know what comes our way
But we fight for life anyway
Like the mother who told us
To be good and strong
And the wise man-
We listened to his song
Of warning when
the day comes that there
Is only a sky of blood
While the moon looks on
With its orangish eye


Scheme ABCDEFGHHIJKJLMNOP
Poetic Form
Metre 111110 0101101 01010000 101 10101 1011 101001 110111101 1111110 1010111 11101 0011 110111 1101 01111 1100111 10111 1111
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 405
Words 84
Sentences 1
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 18
Lines Amount 18
Letters per line (avg) 19
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 336
Words per stanza (avg) 84
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Submitted on November 27, 2013

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Alyssa Fields

Lives in Boulder, Colorado. Originally from Phoenix. Have had several poems published in anthologies and won awards for various poetry contests, but now looking forward to publishing a complete work of my own original poetry. more…

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