Analysis of One summer day

Karolina Marszałkowska 1993 (Gdańsk)



It all seemed so perfect
The sun shone all around
Warm were our hearts
As warm was the ground
The gold ring you gave
The gold ring on the sky
Most perfect day
Our world- you and I
Clear air only heavy with shimmers
Summer flowers burning from the heat
Day changed into night so quiet and silvered
Our first summer day so perfect indeed
It all seemed so perfect
Birds were singing all around
Together with our happy hearts
Silver sky joined with  ground


Scheme AbcbdefeghaiAbcb
Poetic Form
Metre 111101 011101 10101 11101 01111 011101 1011 101101 111010110 101010101 1101111001 10110110101 111101 1010101 010110101 101111
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 437
Words 85
Sentences 1
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 16
Lines Amount 16
Letters per line (avg) 23
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 366
Words per stanza (avg) 86
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Karolina Marszałkowska

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