Analysis of One mould!!!!




Body and soul
Are in one mould
Soul acts a catalyst
Makes body a real gold
If don't work as will of lord
It is a body to be ill afford
If mind goes awry
It is just mud and slurry
If heart is not pure
It will ruin one for sure
If senses don't work sensibly
Soul is pained terribly
Every good deed makes soul bright
Dirty soul is sun without light
Certainly body is souls mason
Body acts with flaws, building at ransom
Body makes soul
Soul governs body
If both are pure
It is a real melody
If one dirt's the soul
It is without air football
Body and soul are twins
Like holy book and ordain
When soul departs only dust remain…….


Scheme ABCBDDEFGGFFHHIJAFGFAKLMM
Poetic Form Tetractys  (40%)
Metre 1001 1011 110100 110011 1111111 1101011101 11101 1111010 11111 1110111 11011100 111100 10011111 10111011 100101110 1011110110 1011 11010 1111 1101100 11101 110111 100111 1101001 110110101
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 605
Words 126
Sentences 2
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 25
Lines Amount 25
Letters per line (avg) 20
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 493
Words per stanza (avg) 126
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Submitted on August 26, 2013

Modified on March 05, 2023

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