Analysis of on the wings

Gregory Ramos 1961 (Azusa)



in life there is but one

in a lifetime some may never find

one who will woo you

one who will choose you

one who gave you a whole world

set in a mold ,like a shell

she cracked , nurtured ,molded

and gave you wings

taught you how to fly

gave you your life again

threw the silky sky

till the end

when she gave you your wings


Scheme X X A A X X X B C X C X B
Poetic Form
Metre 011111 00111101 11111 11111 1111011 1001101 111010 0111 11111 111101 10101 101 111111
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 321
Words 68
Sentences 1
Stanzas 13
Stanza Lengths 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1
Lines Amount 13
Letters per line (avg) 19
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 19
Words per stanza (avg) 5
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Submitted on August 20, 2014

Modified on March 22, 2023

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