Analysis of Offer Me Confidence
Offer me confidence and stability back, I lost mine with the burning hopes.
I loved the roses, I sprayed you of their scents, covering your betrayed smell.
You were my favorite song, where I close my eyes and laying down in bed.
Dreaming of flying a butterfly, and landing on your hand, fingers, to watch you.
The blanket still warm on my side, your side is freezing and warm like before.
My beloved come back, I won't weep and hurt you again, I will drink your pain.
Whenever the door open, and you run to hug me to give me a power to love.
Where I can shut my depression down, by kissing your cheek or even your lips.
After every night of pleasure, you go to sleep like a sheep without realizing that
I haven't screamed of joys, instead I was screaming of hearing by calling her name
Instead of calling my name, but the love we built inside each others souls made
You the only man, to dream and to call my name after the bullet went inside of me.
To die far away from you.
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Metre | 10110000100111110101 110101111111001011 101100111111010101 1011001001011110111 010111111111001101 101111110110111111 010011001111111101011 1111101011101111011 1010011101111101011001 11011101111011011001 0111011101110111011 1010111011111001010111 1110111 |
Characters | 972 |
Words | 189 |
Sentences | 11 |
Stanzas | 6 |
Stanza Lengths | 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 3 |
Lines Amount | 13 |
Letters per line (avg) | 58 |
Words per line (avg) | 14 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 127 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 31 |
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Submitted on June 04, 2015
Modified on March 05, 2023
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