Offer Me Confidence



Offer me confidence and stability back, I lost mine with the burning hopes.
I loved the roses, I sprayed you of their scents, covering your betrayed smell.

You were my favorite song, where I close my eyes and laying down in bed.
Dreaming of flying a butterfly, and landing on your hand, fingers, to watch you.

The blanket still warm on my side, your side is freezing and warm like before.
My beloved come back, I won't weep and hurt you again, I will drink your pain.

Whenever the door open, and you run to hug me to give me a power to love.
Where I can shut my depression down, by kissing your cheek or even your lips.

After every night of pleasure, you go to sleep like a sheep without realizing that
I haven't screamed of joys, instead I was screaming of hearing by calling her name

Instead of calling my name, but the love we built inside each others souls made
You the only man, to dream and to call my name after the bullet went inside of me.
To die far away from you.

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Submitted on June 04, 2015

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Ahmad Al_khatat

I started writing poems since I was ten years old, Most of my poems are free verse or proses.Which talked about sad dark and wild romance .Even some ones talking politics.http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Prose_poetryhttp://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Free_verse ahmad4all_2@hotmail.comMontreal - Canada Thank you more…

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