Analysis of Obscure Birth



Born white
Translucent and obscene
A creature loathed
Despised and unseen
Digesting debris
and reviving this earth
Yet no one awaits
My obscure birth
Rarely do I feel the sun
For Terra-firma
And I are one
Dark and deep
Is where I dwell
Waiting for death
A sharp beak to impale
My frail frigid body
Then to blackness
I will sail


Scheme ABCBDEFEGHGIJKLDML
Poetic Form
Metre 11 010001 0101 01001 01001 001011 11101 1011 1011101 11010 0111 101 1111 1011 011101 111010 1110 111
Closest metre Iambic dimeter
Characters 310
Words 61
Sentences 1
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 18
Lines Amount 18
Letters per line (avg) 15
Words per line (avg) 3
Letters per stanza (avg) 266
Words per stanza (avg) 61
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Submitted on May 01, 2011

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Esther Jacks

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